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Sunday, July 3, 2011

28th June - Video Introduction

Our Piece is on Chapter two, straight from the beginning. Our Theatre in Education piece was about anorexia and eating disorders. We decided that Pink’s Perfect song would be apt for our piece and so at 0:00:01, Imogen is singing this song as the audience enter.
Imogen commences with her narration at 0:02:07 after the audience is in and settled. My monologue begins at 0:02:34 and the full cast acting starts at 0:03:00. This is where Emily and Courtney come in and notice the dress on the skeleton. At 0:03:06 they take the dress of the skeleton and look horrified.  Then Imogen begins another monologue after a short pause of noticing the dress. The actors are in a freeze. At 0:03:30, the children get curious and start asking questions as to what’s wrong and if they can try it on. 0:03:42 is where I begin another monologue. This one is about how I suddenly felt the colour drain from my face, and about how proud of my daughters I am and their amazing and healthy bodies.  At 0:04:26 Emily attempts to pull on the dress, she fails and gets curious as to why. 0:04:43 is where I explain about my shame. Then I explain to them how I feel at 0:04:48 and from here at 0:04:58, Emily and I begin our physical theatre set up. The mirror scene and physical theatre starts at 0:05:09. This is a key point in our Performance and many of the audience members explained how they understood and liked this part of the piece. 0:05:28 is where Emily and the jibing begin. She tries to mock me, make fun of me, and drives me to anorexia. During this, Emily begins to chant Fat, Trapped, Alone at 0:06:17 then I join in at 0:06:30 and the break down in tears at 0:06:43. This is the Brecht: Tickle, Slap method.
At 0:06:45 I begin my ‘Diet Diary’. This is where I list all the things I have eaten for the past three days. At 0:07:24 Emily tells me I need to try harder. My diet suddenly changes for the next four days at 0:07:33. Courtney enters at 0:08:07 and I faint at 0:08:12. I explained how I was okay but was in hospital for three weeks at 0:08:22. The mirror scene was over and Imogen’s Narration began again at 0:08:29. Emily, Courtney and I started setting up the performance space back to how it was at 0:08:35. Imogen finished her monologue as I began my last one at 0:09:03. The performance finished at 0:10:09 and we bowed and receive applause at 0:10:10. We introduced the hot seating workshop and I left the room at 0:10:35 and at 0:10:52, they spent a minute thinking about a question to ask me. At 0:12:02, I entered the room to begin the hot seating workshop. At 0:13:19, a child asked a really good question. He asked what I would do if my daughters became anorexic. I really liked this question as it proves he understood the character roles as he recognised that Emily and Courtney were my daughters. It is also nice that he is turning the question and issue round on me to see what I would do as an onlooker of this problem. At 0:16:20, another boy asked what would I do if somebody called me fat now? I also liked this question as it shows his curiosity of the issue and it gives people a deeper background of anorexia. At 0:17:12, we finished the hot seating and started to hand out the questionnaires we set.
 At 0:18:27 we began a full group video assessment. At 0:18:33 Chloe said she liked the mirror scene and elaborated on what it showed. This made me smile as it shows that they understood it was a mirror and understood what the scene was about. At 0:21:04, a girl called Bethany said she thought it was good how we sent the message that you can look pretty in your own way and that you shouldn’t worry what people think of you.   A girl at 0:24:39 said that she didn’t join in the Fat Trapped, Alone chanting because she felt it was mean.

28th June - Peer assesment

During this lesson, Olly and I exchanged homework to evaluate each others piece. We looked at each others work and wrote two targets for improvement. My targets were to include the heath and safety references and to mention the stage directions used in my performance. Olly's Targets were to Be more positive about himself. He is very negative when it comes to talking about himself and needs to think more positive and say more good things about himself. He also needs to detail his answers a little more as he says something negative but doesn't explain how, why, who what etc...
All in all Olly is very good at what he does, he just doesn't have enough confidence in himself.

Thursday, June 30, 2011

Sunday, June 26, 2011

21st June - Evidence of group PLTS

Effective participators:
Focus – Young people actively engage with issues that affect them and those around them. They play a full part in the life of their school, college, workplace, or wider community by taking responsible actions to bring improvements for others as well as themselves.

Personal learning and thinking skills –
Discuss and resolve concerns:
We were worried that we wouldn’t finish the performance before the deadline. We all had to come together and seriously work hard. My group met up during the Easter holidays as there was not many school days during Easter. I was unable to as I was on holiday but my group got a lot of work done and this really helped when rehearsing back at school.
Present a persuasive case for action:
Our piece focuses on a skeleton and we really needed one for the performance. The only way we would be able to get one of these is by borrowing one form the science lab at school. Emily and I went up to ask them and they were adamant we weren’t allowed to use their new one but said we could use the old, one armed, legless skeleton if we wanted. This we agreed to straight away because we really needed one. Before they agreed to letting us have this is because we mentioned how crucial it was that we had it and that it was for drama involving Miss Woffinden. They reluctantly agreed but one of the lab technicians recorded our work and was thrilled to see the skeleton in action and was really happy they let us have it.
Propose practical ways forward breaking these down into manageable steps:
Writing the script. We were baffled as to where to start. We didn’t know which part of anorexia we should show. We weren’t sure how in depth to take it. Then Imogen found a blog site which was a discussion board where people posted their problems etc... She found a post called The Skeleton in My Closet. We read the piece and straight away knew that this was for us. It was a very old post and there was no way we could contact the anonymous writer to ask permission to use the post. We scripted it anyway, created drafts from it and gave more information and events to happen within the piece. Imogen then went home and collaborated our ideas and wrote the first draft for our final piece.
Identify improvements:
My lines and monologues. I had a lot of work ahead of me to try and learn these in the required time. I had improved so much by the performance from the start in several ways. I had perfected my lines, I had progressed with my body language and facial features when performing and I had increased my audience awareness. Courtney managed to project her voice when she spoke and remembered her lines. She was also supposed to stop masking and not have her back to the audience, but this didn’t work as she never listened to this feedback and still continued to do it. Emily projected her voice too and did really well to remember her lines for the mirror scene I know she was struggling with. Imogen walked around the room and engaged with us as the characters as well and the audience as Miss Woffinden had asked her to.  
Influencing others, balancing diverse views:
We had an issue with the skeleton and how we were going to display it. Emily had decided that draping a piece of black lace over the skeleton would give it a good effect. I agreed and so did Courtney but Imogen staying impartial. Then Emily thought that threading some flowers through the lace would give it a lonely daunting feel, I agreed and Emily and I then tried it. Courtney was now impartial, Emily and I liked it but Imogen despised it. She refused to even negotiate on one or two flowers. In the end we agreed to disagree and kept the lace on but took the flowers off.
Act as an advocate for views and beliefs that differ from their own:
I had to play an older character which was hard and I had to grasp the characteristics of an adult to be able to play this piece. My character also has an eating disorder so I had to adapt myself to play this character too. This was hard because I didn’t want to be insensitive to anyone suffering from this problem, or the writer so I really had to think about how I would do this. Emily also had to adjust herself as she was playing ‘the devil inside the mirror’, who was my enemy, this was hard for her and me and we are best friends but had to hate each other in this play.
Team Workers:
Focus – Young people work confidently with others, adapting to different contexts and taking responsibility for their own part. They listen to and take account of different views. They form collaborative relationships, resolving issues to reach agreed outcomes.  

Personal learning and thinking skills –
Collaborate with others towards common goals:
When we wrote the script for our TIE piece we worked collaboratively to finish it for the deadline. Everyone in our group was involved in the process of this piece. Courtney and Emily looked up facts and figures, Imogen re wrote the blog into a script and I helped with the order of which the events would happen and the drama conventions I thought might be good to use.
Reach agreements, managing discussions to achieve results:
We decided on physical theatre as it would display the struggle in Stacey’s head. We decided that making somebody look fat would be too comical so we made it physiological instead. Emily came up with the idea of physical theatre and so Emily and I worked together to create a haunting physiological idea of inside Stacey’s head.
Adapt behaviour to suit different roles and situations including leadership roles:
Me playing Stacey. I was the main character and really had to work hard to hold the piece as it revolved around me. I also took on the role of director at times to try and adapt other members characters and to help the scene progress.
Show fairness and consideration to others:
Our group decided it was best if we let Imogen write the script and the song. This is because she is the most musically talented out of all of us and showed a big interest into wanting to write the script. We all gave input for these jobs but Imogen had the final say on these. We decided that she deserved to be in charge of the two things she really wanted to do.
Take responsibility:
I directed at times, I was the main character in the piece and the whole issue revolved around my character, and Emily and I had the idea of the mirror and step by step Emily, Imogen and I created the mirror. Imogen wrote the script and the song. Emily created the Mirror and the Narrator Book.
Provide constructive support and feedback for others:
We kept reminding Courtney to project her voice, stop masking and not have her back to the audience. Several members from the other groups told her too but unfortunately this didn’t work and she still did it during the real performance. My team members supported me when I was learning my lines and monologues and it really helped me learn them quicker.

Saturday, June 18, 2011

14th June - Feedback for the Gender Equality piece

In this group -
Abi Lee,
Olly Smith
Frankie Cooney, and
Jack Silkstone

Is this an effective piece of Theatre In Education and why ?

Yes! I believe this was a very strong yet controversial piece of Theatre in Education. The audience got involved with the piece and the conventions and said they would really think about this as they often make sexist remarks without realising it. They said the will definitely think twice before making another sexist remark!

What conventions did they use to engage the audience?
Forum Theatre - Increased the amusement of the piece.
Narration - Two narrators allowed you to pick a side!
Brechian set - The labells for 'The house', 'The woods' etc...

Improvements:

Work out the order of the actions cards - Jack didn't really know what he was doing with this and needs to learn it a little better and arrange it so it's more organised.

How well did they worked as a group?

Very! They supported each other on stage and covered up for each other when a mistake was made. They held each other very well and as a group, performed a very strong piece of Theatre in Education.

14th June - Feedback for the Divorce Piece

In this group -
Francesca Hippey,
Seb Ainsworth and
Tom Willshaw.

Is this an effective piece of Theatre In Education and why ?

Yes! This was a very effective piece of Theatre In Education as the audience got involved with the piece and like Emily, Imogen and I got us very emotional and nearly in tears! I also liked how the piece was very personal to the actors and showed their true emotions, as well as their acting abilities. This was very professional and mature. The atmosphere was friendly and welcoming.

What conventions did they use to engage the audience?Music - In the backgorund,
Song - Seb, his guitar and some very emotional lyrics,
Direct address,
Physical theatre,
Hot seating.

How well did they work as a group?

Very! They held each other very well and as a group, performed a very strong piece of Theatre in Education. They made no mistakes that were recognisable and had clearly all worked hard.

Things to improve:
At times, Seb wasn't making eye conatct with the audience during the direct address. This is key for direct address and is what makes the audience feel part of it. Seb needs to make more eye contact next time.

Other than that this piece was fab and I really enjoyed watching it and seeing how it effected different members of the audience.

14th June - Sixth Formers feedback

A group of A level drama sixth formers watched our piece and gave us a more in depth, and helpful bit of feedback for our piece. They are studying A level drama and so have more of an understanding and knowledge of Theatre in Education.

Here is what they said:
Natasha -
This is an effective piece of Theatre In Education because:
Very powerful imagery that would be shocking to the audience.The inclusion of the audience and interactivity ensured the performance was effective and educational.

What conventions had we used and were they effective?
-songs to introduce topic
-Thought tracking
-strong imagery; Skeleton which anchored meaning, very effective.
-Audience participation- Brecht's- tickle/slap technique - "Trapped, Fat, Alone." YES,very effective.

Performance based added comments:

Really good managing of questions in hot seating activity.
Poppy -
Was this an effective piece of Theatre In Education?:
-Imogen did well to maintain singing during the pupils sitting and moving.
-Use of narrative and direct address informs the audience

What conventions had we used and were they effective?:
-Unison of questions.
- Mirror sequence- unique , well done!
-Audience participation.

Any more performance comments and improvements:
- The menu sequence improved.
-Hair needed to be tied back.
-Good audience choice to talk to about anorexia.
-Beth clearly knew her character.
-Would have been better to include statistics about anorexia.
- Needed Beth's character to leave before moving on after the hot seating.

Gemma -
Was this an effective piece of Theatre In Education?:
-Good sense of reality when putting across the thoughts of Stacey.
-Informative whilst being enjoyable.
-Involving the audience.
-great representation of the skeleton representing Stacey's body.

What conventions had we used, were they good and effective?:
-The mirror images
-The repetitive "fat, trapped, alone." - could be improved by more shouting and more build up.
-Song at the start worked very well, with the lyrics complimenting the piece.

Anything we could have improved on any more comments?:
-To be more open when acting, open arms.
-More gestures.
-Beth was Great at managing questions in hot seating.
-Good use of freeze frames.
-Direct address was done well.
This feedback is very helpful and a lot more in depth than the year 8's feedback. I  liked having a variety of age ranges viewing our piece as it gives us a variety of feedback to help us evaluate our piece.

14th June - The Performance!

Today was the day of our performance. It was here at last! I couldn't wait to perform! It was a mad rush all day, while everybody did last minute rehearsals, line run through's and sorted out props etc...
Our group spent our time wisely, rehearsing in costume, using our props (some of which was our first time using them!) and going over our lines. I felt that I needed this extra last minute time just to feel a little more at ease when performing.
We originally were only going to perform to one class of year 8's but instead performed to two year 8 classes and an A level drama class. This was quite unnerving as the audience space was so full but I enjoyed seeing so many people when performing and using my Direct Address.
The year 8's seemed to really get involved in the performance and the drama conventions and their feedback was really reliving and appreciated. They filled in the questionnaires quite happily and gladly and really got involved when it came to Hot Seating. They asked some really good and appropriate questions and helped me develop my character further with their participation.
During rehearsal, Imogen was playing around on Seb's guitar and started playing Perfect by Pink. I knew immediately that this song would be perfect for Imogen to sing as our audience were entering. Imogen decided not to sing the song we had previously written as she felt uncomfortable and had an issue with her nerves so I wasn't going to push her to sing this song. But after lots of 'persuading'! Imogen decided she would do it. I knew this song was right because it is all about self image, self belief and links well to our performance. It had a great effect on people and Mr Truscott even mentioned it during the feedback session which was videoed.
The hot seating was interesting at the end of the piece as some audience members asked me some questions which I hadn't thought of at all and so this really increased my confidence to answer the questions.
Overall the day was really fun, entertaining and enjoyable. It has improved my confidence loads and helped me to relate to my character even more for the evaluation.

Saturday, June 11, 2011

7th June - Group PLTS

During this lesson, Emily and I managed to start another frame for our mirror as our other one has gone missing. Unfortunately we had to go to an exam and couldn't finish it off. Imogen didn't have an exam, so instead of learning lines or helping herself, she kindly offered to finish it for us and by the sounds of it did a fantastic job! We also managed to do a full run with every body's lines perfect!

Emily and I have really improved our physical theatre scene, Courtney remembered her lines very well and I really liked how Imogen now is 'Part' of the performance and she interacts with the characters as her role as narrator.

I think everybody worked really hard and we had come such a long way since the beginning.
The PLTS and wheather we do them well or not:
PLTS - Self Manager:
Be organised - Check!
Manage emotions - Sort of,
Go for it, finish it - Nearly!
Manage risks - Check!
PLTS - Creative Thinker:
Imagine - Definitely!
Question assumptions - Sort of,
Take creative risks - Yep and they definitely pay off!
Make links - Sort of,
PLTS - Effective Participator:
Persuade others - Oh Yeah!
Identify issues - Check!
Find solutions - Almost,
Get involved - Most of us,
PLTS - Reflective Learner:
Set yourself challenges - Check!
Plan - Do - Review - Plan - Yes, Do - Yes, Review - Almost!
Invite Feedback - Check!
Share Learning - Definitely!
PLTS - Team Worker:
Take responsibility - Most of us,
Evaluate the team - Check!
Build team strength - Yes! Our team works really effectively and bonds well,
Manage the team - Check! We all take it in turns to manage our team,
PLTS - Independent Enquirer:
Reach conclusions - Sometimes!
Evaluate the evidence - Sometimes!
Explore a question - Sometimes!
Stay objective - Sometimes!

Overall our least confident category is being Independent enquirers and we need to work a little harder on this one as a whole.

7th June - Feedback

Here are some targets we need to complete by the end of this lesson;

1. Have a rough idea of what we will be doing in our workshop. (Drama conventions, ect.)
- Conscience Alley.
- Role On The Wall.
- Physical Theatre.
2. Have a smooth full run of the piece and feel comfortable with it.
- Rehearse Lines.
- Movement.
3.  Get some more feedback and improve.

7th June - Pavla Beier interview

It is really helpful to have two interviews from two completely different people who virtually have the same job, Gail McIntyre, the Artistic director from The West Yorkshire Playhouse and Pavla Beier, the Artistic Director at Blah Blah Blah Theatre in Education company. Gail came into our school and allowed us to interview her directly where as Pavla asked us to email our questions, she then replied with a lot to say!

In Pavla's Interview, what interested me the most was the when she said that they don't have children coming to them and they prefer going to the children in their surroundings. This is because 'using a familiar space to the children IE- their classroom or school hall transforms the performance in an imaginative way.'

I really agree with Pavla as it makes the set seem more real as it was once their hall or classroom and now it's a ....... (for example : A jungle).

Being given two Artistic directors interviews really helps us to compare and contrast the two sets of answers.

Tuesday, June 7, 2011

7th May - 3 Targets to acheive before the end of the lesson

At the start of the lesson we each thought of three targets to achieve before the end of the lesson. Mine are:

*Learn and Practice Monologues,
*Full run through of our performance,
*Evaluate own piece and re draft our evaluation form.

Wednesday, May 25, 2011

24th May 2011 - The target audience and the intention of our piece

24th May 2011 - The target audience and the intention of our piece

The target audience for our Anorexia piece called ‘The Skeleton in my Closet’ is year 8’s at Brigshaw High School, preferably a drama class. We decided on this age range because we thought that our piece uses quite complicated range of language and we didn’t think that it would be suitable to perform to primary school students simply because they wouldn’t understand the script. Therefore we have chosen year 8’s at high school. We thought that year 7’s are still young and are the ‘babies’ of the school and they don’t really think about things like this. In year 9, you have already split into the different ‘clicks’ and are already your own person. Year 8 is the change into this and this is a year with terrible peer pressure and struggles with body image. This is why we thought it is perfect to perform to this age group.
The reason we are performing this anorexia piece is because we believe that anorexia is quite a common social issue within England. Also for me, anorexia is quite close to my heart as my Nana has had anorexia since she was very young and mostly lives off of one banana a week.
Our group decided to have a look on some real life blogs, which people have posted online to try and create a script from there. We wanted our performance to be as accurate and as close to peoples heart as possible. We chose a blog in which an anonymous blogger posted a story what happened to her and decided to use some of her dialogue and her storyline to create our own piece.

Monday, May 23, 2011

23rd May - West Yorkshire Playhouse Funding

23rd May - How the West Yorkshire Playhouse is Funded,

The West Yorkshire Playhouse has been awarded a grant of more than £1.4 million from Arts Council England's National Lottery fund to run a two year programme of research and development. The money will help fund new initiatives, pilot studies and creative projects. It has been funded by the Arts council to help explore the most effective ways of supporting organisational development at arts venues.
The funding will allow The Playhouse to explore ideas to inform a new business model for the theatre and develop relationships with other artists, organisations and companies.
Audiences should expect upcoming seasons at the Playhouse to look a little different as a result of the project, and the new initiatives being used, added the playhouse.
"This is a fantastic way to begin our 21st birthday year and a great vote of confidence from Arts Council England in the work we produce and the significance of the Playhouse regionally and nationally."This exercise can and will only make us a stronger and more determined producing theatre that the people of Leeds can be proud to have at the centre of their city." Says Sheena Wrigley, general director and joint chief executive at the Playhouse.
West Yorkshire Playhouse will receive £1,533,147 in 2008/2009, £1,574,542 in 2009/2010, £1,608,969 in 2010/2011 and £1,497,950 in 2011/2012.
As a national portfolio organization, West Yorkshire Playhouse has been offered £1,497,950 in 2012/2013, £1,533,901 in 2013/2014 and £1,573,782 in 2014/2015. This is subject to a funding agreement being agreed.

Information from:

http://www.yorkshirepost.co.uk/news/around-yorkshire/local-stories/west_yorkshire_playhouse_wins_163_1_4m_lottery_funding_1_3031092

http://www.artscouncil.org.uk/rfo/west-yorkshire-playhouse/

Wednesday, May 18, 2011

17th May - Props

Lesson Objectives:
Plan the final piece for our project,
Arrange Props and work out what set and lighting we need,
Carry out our plans.

During Miss Woffinden's period 4 lesson, Emily and I were discussing the use of props and experimented with the skeleton we are using to try to add more lonely, heartfelt effects. We also set to work on making the frame for the 'mirror' in our performance. We first raided the art cupboards to find some card or thin wood, then we visited Conrad Cookson who helped us out by cutting them to be the same size, then went back to art to use their glue gun to glue the pieces together. Next week we will be gluing gold paper on it and decorating it (which I will let Emily do as she is the most artistic of the two!) Here are some pictures of what we did with the skeleton:


This is our skeleton on the rail that we are using.

We then experimented with a black piece of lace which we though added a sense of loneliness and depression.

Emily and I decided to cover the face to see if it would add an expressionless effect.

And here we thought that if we cover it to its waist then it will emphasise the size of the waist and make it look smaller than it really is.
Emily and I thought it would be a good idea to experiment with props like this to decide what works best and gives our piece more life whilst also making it look darker. Courtney took a back seat on this task whilst doing nothing and Imogen kept constantly saying in a patronising voice "Are you sure this is productive girlie's?" And no matter how many times Emily and I explained it was important and that we were trying to really interact and get into the play by analysing props and seeing what works best for the whole team to make our piece perfect. She then continued to repeat this and refuse to help us as she agreed it was "NOT productive". This really got on my nerves and I agree that we should agree to disagree but as a group Emily and I tried to involve the group in making a group decision affecting the performance and we found this extremely hard but we had to do it on our own anyway. Emily and I feel exactly the same and hope that the next performance will not be the same.

11th May 2011 - Cloudbusting at the West Yorkshire Playhouse!!!

On Wednesday 11th May 2011, the Cloudbusting gang went to The West Yorkshire Playhouse to perform the fantastic play by Helen Blakeman. We got there at 10:45am, to be greeted by the other school Castleford High and Chris from the National Theatre in London. We were told the itinerary for the day and then departed for the rehearsal room in the First Floor building which is where we were going to start the day. Here we spent 2hours rehearsing which was a lot of help as we had changed a tremendous amount since the last productions and speaking for the stage crew, we needed a bit more practice as to what we were doing and when. Obviously we had no props and so we had to improvise, for example using a bench, a bin and 2 chairs for the  4 stairs, a chair for the table etc... This was quite amusing but also a bit annoying as the actors couldn't interact and act as they would have been doing with our proper props.
Once we had finished this, we Had lunch and went to do the lighting and tech rehearsal. This is so the tech guys knew what their cues were and the same for Miss Wallbank and Liam Gibson (our sound and light techs. This was quite laborious as it was stop start all the time but that gave the play a real sense of life. At this point we knew the play was coming to life and happening. Especially when the set went up. This, although stressed and hectic made everybody smile. Seeing our set up in the West Yorkshire Playhouse made us feel special.
After we had dinner, we changed into our costumes and went for the voice call. This is where Chris set us all out on stage and warmed up our voices with us by doing a number of different vocal and confidence building activities. We made silly faces to warm up our muscles in our face and then massaged our face. We also put our thumbs on our belly buttons to feel the muscles relaxing and contracting when we exhaled a letter or digraph. These consisted of p, d, s, c, o, t, g, h and b and digraphs of sh, ch, th and gr. Then we said words with the clusters involved. These were words like cougar etc...
Then Chris split the two schools so that half of the two were in the audience and the other half were on stage. Then we had to shout lines from the two scripts to the other group loud. He would then individually work on our diction and volume. As I don't have a line in the play, I used Megan's line: "Got it, Sparkle the dog, my dog sir!" I was told to make sure I pronounce the D's on both the dogs.
Then at 7:00pm we were up! It was time and there was no turning back (of course none of us wanted to!) and we were all excited and nervous all at the same time. Many people became paranoid about forgetting lines and cues etc... but overall it was a fantastic performance. We made one mistake that I noticed and that was that I was the only member of the crew that remembered to take the stairs off and so Tommy and Seb had to help me. The other set crew should have done it but they forgot and by the time they remembered it, it was too late. This didn't matter though because nobody noticed and the fabulous performance and everybodys excitement overruled this error.
We then had a 10 minute interval, then went to watch Castleford High with their performance of 'Too Fast'. I have to admit that 2 actors and their characters carried the perfromance and if it hadn't been for them, the play would have been extremely dull.
Either way everybody had a great time and we were all buzzing all night. This week we get the results back as to who has won the competition and which school is performing at the National Theatre in London. May the best school win... (I hope that's us!!!)

17th May 2011 - Moving the Performance Date

During Period 3 in Miss Woffindens lesson we discussed why we had changed the dates of our TIE performances. We were planning on performing on 4th May but due to training days, illnesses, exams and simply not being ready we extended our deadline to the 14th June.
As for not being ready, this is because we weren't given enough time in relation to lesson rehearsals and gathering props, sorting lighting etc... Also now we have an extended deadline we can book to perform during a class (our's is Year 8's during period 5) where as before we left it too late too short notice.
I am glad that this has happened as it has taught all of us that some things just don't always go the way they were planned to go and appreciate that although this unit is tough and stressful, you really do ave to be on target and work to the best of your abilities in order for things to go as planned and smoothly.
Now we are rehearsing our socks off so that we will be ready to perform naturally and professionally to our slightly unwilling year 8's!!!

Tuesday, May 17, 2011

17th May - Unit One Final Marks

Today in Mr Truscott's lesson we were told our grade we had achieved for unit one. To get an A you had to get 36 marks. I was rather annoyed with myself, as I recieved 35 Marks. This means I got a B but one mark off an A. I am yet to decide whether to retake the unit again to achieve an A / A*.

Thursday, May 12, 2011

10th May - Bertolt Brecht

10th May - Bertolt Brecht

Bertolt Brecht was born 10 February 1898 and died 14 August 1956. Brecht was a German poet, playwright, and theatre director; An influential theatre practitioner of the 20th century.
Brecht believed the stage should be brightly lit at all times; special effects to create mood were not allowed. (Logically, he could have allowed it, if accompanied by some device to draw attention to it - such as a statement from a character.) The sources of light should be plainly visible - just as those over a boxing-ring (Brecht's comparison).
The curtain is to be used for the display of titles, captions or comments. Placards may be placed in the auditorium, bearing instructions, such as “Don't stare so romantically” ( from Drums in the Night). The set behind the curtain is suggestive, not realistic; that is to say, while very authentic props may be used, (as, say, Mother Courage's handcart) there will be no elaborate arrangement of these in a naturalistic stage set.
The music, too, must have a visible source - musicians may even be on the stage. Interruptions for songs are announced or indicated by projection of a title, or flags and trumpets will descend from the flies.
In the Epic theatre the sources of light should be visible at all times, as they are, say, in a boxing ring (Brecht's comparison). Lighting should be uniformly bright; effects of colour and dimming are not to be allowed. This is partly explicable in terms of Brecht's taste for simplicity and austerity, partly in terms of his desire to avoid creating emotional effects.

10th May - Lesson Write up - Contracts

10th May - Contracts

In today's lesson we changed the performance deadline we decided to extend the deadline as our performances are not ready to show yet. Our new performance date is Tuesday 14th June during period 5. We are performing to a year 8 drama group as year 8's are our target audience.

We then discussed contracts for a touring theatre company, what is involved in a contract to make the employer and employee understand exactly what is involved and to please them. We then typed out some questions that we thought might be included in a contract and to develop our understanding of contracts we were set to create our own for homework.
These were the questions:

The size of the performance space - How big is the performance space?
Target Audience (suitability), - What is the target audience for the piece? / How suitable is the piece?
Specify Number of viewers, - How many seats does the performance space have? / How many viewers does it hold?
How long have we got to perform? - How long do we have to perform? / Is there a certain time limit?
How much time needed for set up and workshop? Do you have a specific time for set up and or workshop?
Accessibility, - How easy is the access to the performance space? / Do you have any loading bays for set and or props?
Equipment needed, - Do you have ....... (anything you don't wish to take or don't have yourself) eg CD player?
Are the students used to seeing theatre work? - How familiar are the students with the theatre? / Do they know different theatre conventions? / Are they completely knew to the theatre?
Have they ever viewed our companies work before? - Have you ever used our theatre company before? / Have the students ever seen our work before? / If Yes which pieces?
Itinerary - Which goes first; workshop or performance?
We also read a Contract given to the school by Splendid Productions for a previous piece, which school had to fill out in order for the play to go ahead as they had to tour up from London. This involved the legalities and health and safety information. There was also an "I agree" or an "I have read the terms and accept the requirements" which the teacher or member of staff in charge have to sign.

10th May - Props and Costume

10th May
As a group we discussed set, props and costume needed for our piece; we had to decide what was a realistic idea and what wasn't and wouldn't work.

Definite props that we have are:

The dress - To symbolise her tiny figure (focusing on the waist mainly) and to use during the flashback of her anorexic past.

Lectern - For Imogen as the narrator, so it looks like she is really telling the story especially during the flashback.

Clothes Rail - To use as a clothes rail to hang up some clothes including the dress. Also used as a mirror during the flashback scene.

Props we still need to get:

Some form of sweet / chocolaty food - This will be used in the taunting scene to tease Stacey (played by me).

2 Jumpers - Different sizes - 1 Large jumper for Emily (my reflection) to wear and look baggy, another smaller jumper of the same style to look fitted. These jumpers will then be switched during the performance so Emily ends up warning the fitted one and me the baggy one (trying to cover up the characters deteriorating figure).

An underskirt - In Emily's Possession, just need to be brought into school - To try and focus the in on the wait on the dress to make an illusion that it is a lot smaller that it really is (because it is portraying a size 4 dress).

Props we may be using:

Doll and Dress - For Courtney to use at the beginning of the performance to symbolise my character - We may not be doing this scene, therefore we may not need this prop.

The only problem in our group is using the skeleton. We dont want to make it funny and amusing as it is to be informative and serious. We also dont want to make it creepy and make people feel uncomfortable as they are doing us a favour being an sensible audience. Anorexia is a very serious social issue and we want to adress it in a sensitive mature way. We don't want to hit a nerve for one of the members of the audience and need to be responsible and work out what is the best idea with the audience in mind. When using props we need to consider how the actors work with props and interact with them. If they laugh we can then challenge them to this during the workshop. We need to think about the way we enter the room and adapt to the props in a proffesional way.

Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Theatre in Education - questions to include into a contract

The size of the performance space,
Target Audience (suitability),
Specify Number of viewers,
How long have we got to perfom?
How much time needed for set up and workshop?
Accessibility,
Equipment needed,
Are the students used to seeing theatre?
Have they ever viewed our companies work before?

3rd May - Lesson Write up

3rd May - Lesson write up

In todays lesson Imogen, Emily, Courney and I practiced more of our physical theatre for the piece. We discussed where in the piece we could use our song, how many times to play/ perform it and what kind of emotions it would create.

Sunday, May 8, 2011

3rd May - Rewrite of Gail McIntyre interview

This is my rewrite of the interview, The bits written in red are the added bits. 

19th April – Interview with Gail McIntyre
Creative Arts and Media Diploma
Miss Woffinden
Bethany Kaye


To begin the session Gail started off by telling us all a little bit about herself. She is the Associate Director at the West Yorkshire Playhouse and is in charge of everything involving theatre in education. If something goes wrong, it’s her fault, if there’s a problem, colleagues will go to her and vice versa if it’s positive. Basically she is control of everything apart from deciding on what TIE themes to perform. For example, Gail would really like to do a piece on Child carers but she has been told that this project will not be funded and she won’t get paid, however if she does another piece about knife crime she will be paid and this project will be funded because it’s what the viewers want. I think this is really unfair, as the viewers don’t know what they want. They are roped into a performance because of the advertising and the ideas the theatre companies come up with. I think if Gail were to do a piece on Child Carers it would be a massive hit and would grab the attention of several different audience types. This is because it is such a worldwide issue but it is not as verbal as other issues for example - anorexia. I think child carers have such a hard job and unfortunately too many of them suffer in silence. I reckon that if this were to be shown in a theatre, then many different audiences would be keen to be involved. Elders because it is a more traditional issue that doesn't focus on body image or peer pressure, adults again for the same reason and maybe past experiences and young adults, to show them just how blessed there life is or maybe they are a young carer too. Any of these reasons are all just as valuable and I think that doing this piece would really be an eye opener for many people.
Gail’s responsibilities within different schools involve planning, programming and delivering. The youngest age range is 3-5year olds. She creates work with varieties of different artists eg – actors, singers, dancers, poets ect...  This sounds quite cool and a challenging but fun job.
Lots of Gail’s decided age ranges have expanded due to teachers or guardians deciding that the TIE piece is suitable for another or a different age range. She has worked at the West Yorkshire Playhouse for a long time and has been in charge of the Christmas production in the courtyard for 5 years now. I think this is good that the teachers have a voice but kind of undermines the time Gail has spent deciding on the age ranges.
Her current project is called The Refugee Boy. It will be in the theatre in August 2012. This piece is by Benjamin Zephaniah but adapted by Yorkshire poet, Lemn Sissay. She said she is passionate about touring in schools. “It’s something I have always wanted to do and dreamed about it as a child. I have to say I am a very lucky person for getting the job of my dreams!”  She is right here!

What styles of theatre do you use in your productions?
“It’s actually not always up to us. Some people may decline some of our ideas but give you another option. I really want to do a TIE piece on Child Carers but I have been told I would not be funded for this. Instead a piece about knife crime is wanted so I have to do this otherwise I will not get paid. I also really want to work with different cultures; Especially the Asian/ Indian cultures of theatre.” This is unfair because Gail deserves to do what she wants to do but I can see why she isn’t allowed as the funding plays a massive part in it.
How are your projects funded?
“The touring in schools work with our TIE pieces are funded by Education Leeds, but this funding stops at the end of this year (2011). The work done at the Playhouse is funded by the Arts Council but other specific productions i.e. - knife crime – are funded by The Home Office, or The Royal Armouries ect... We are also paid for commissioning monologues.” I think it’s good they get money from different companies as it is very hard to fund a project.

Is there a hierarchy for the roles/ responsibilities within the company?
“Whatever happens, I am responsible for everything! I make nearly every decision about what is happening concerning TIE. The hierarchies are led by different artists. For example the actors, playwrights, singers, poets ect... Make their own decisions about their own pieces. You have to decide who is the most skilled at individual things with their abilities. Within the theatre you have to be collaborative.” This is a massive responsibility! The idea is very flattering but scary!
How long does it take you to produce a TIE piece of high quality?
“Well... If we commission a piece in 2008, we tell the writers and they have a year to produce a script, (whilst busy with other work). We usually play for two years ahead. We then rehearse 9-5 Monday- Saturday for 3-4 weeks. Then the designers and set and props crew ect... need time to work out what’s going on in the piece. You have to work out how YOU want it to look, how YOU want people to see it and what they will see.  As well as the rehearsal schedule to think about we have to book the tour and work on the workshop to follow the performance.” This is a good amount of time and personally I am finding it hard to create a good piece of TIE within our time boundaries.
Are the age groups difficult to choose?
“No they are all just different. I have to find the things that will encourage and inspire people and decide which age range it will have the biggest impact on. To do my job your really have to be in touch with any age group to connect to them properly.” I find it hard to decide what performance would suit which age rang. This is definitely not my strongest point!
Do you use songs and music in you performances?
“Yes in different ways. The music in the show First Cut portrays the life and emotional journeys of the character. In the Worm Collector we use sound effects to create an atmosphere and explain where you are without actually being there. This sets the scene whilst being versatile.
Music and sounds makes the journey unfold and tells the story. We try stuff in rehearsals to see what works and what doesn’t.  Music for younger ages like Visiting Grandpa, for 3-5 year olds is more appropriate as it engages there minds in a more fun way.”  I totally agree with what Gail says here and we are using our music for the exact reason too.
How do you connect with the different audiences?
“Forum theatre is a good way to get the audience involved, depending on the audience. In The Snow Queen, the actors who play the robbers rob the audience (without harassing them). This is a fun way to connect the audience with the performance and make them feel part of the story.”  I do like it when the actors engage with the audience :) I find it fun and it makes me feel part of the performance.
How do you get different audience types into the theatre?
“There are different ways to do this. Advertising helps a lot. The Playhouse is a very lucky company and has a very clever and very big marketing team.  
Encouraging schools and engaging with creativity is the other way to get audiences.  We just have to work out what different audiences want.” I can imagine this is a long and tedious project.
Have you ever acted and directed yourself at the same time?
“No, I really don’t think anybody should ever act and direct themselves at the same time. You can tell who does this because of their expressions in the performance. They are never fully connected to the character and it’s very hard to do so when you are acting.” I have noticed this before and it kind of spoils the production a bit.

Do you gather inspiration by seeing other peoples work?
“Yes you have to otherwise it is very hard to think of something original without seeing a starting point. There are no new ideas; they are what you make them.” This is interesting and I have never seen it this way before.
Have you ever had any projects where you feel you have just ‘Had Enough’?
No, Never. Things I have worked on have become slightly tedious or challenging because of the combination of colleagues I worked with but I never ever have had enough of a project. This is a good sign and shows she has a lot of patience and doesn’t give in quickly.
Do you enjoy your job?
Yes! Very much. It’s a very challenging job. It’s very challenging to find what it is that will make a great piece. What will inspire people? You know a piece is good if the actors feel part of it. I think this is really positive and again totally agree!!!

I really liked meeting Gail. She seems like a really lovely person and she seems so approachable and really good at what she does. Gail said she wanted to come and see our TIE pieces! This excited me and scared me at the same time! I think it would be a great opportunity for Gail to watch our performances and we would more than likely get excellent feedback and constructive criticism to work on! I think that this has influenced my creative process by making me see how much time and effort it takes to create a TIE piece of high quality. I am now quite nervous as we dont have that much time left before performing and Gail said that it usually takes up to 2 years to create a good TIE piece. Now I see just how hard everybody needs to work to complete this task to make it fab! I appreciate everything Gail had to say and look forward to getting back on task to make her and Miss Woffinden proud. Thank you Miss Woffinden for planning this meeting :)
 

3rd May - Feeback

3rd May - Feedback
In Miss Woffinden’s Lesson we received our homework back with feedback on it. We discussed how we felt meeting Gail McIntyre and were set the homework to redraft our Interview, add corrections and include targets. My Target was:
Evaluate the Experience
How has it influenced your creative process?
What did you learn?
I have decided not to edit my original piece of work but to copy it into another post and make the corrections from there. This is so you can see what has changed and to make the improvement more visible.

26th April - The Worm Collector

26th April – The Worm Collector
The worm collector is a production containing knife crime for young adults. It was performed on the 12th February 2010 to the 13th February 2010 in the courtyard theatre at the West Yorkshire Playhouse.

“Mark has been making a film, armed with a digital camera, an arsenal of willing family members and an unusual subject matter. Mark wants to know who has the best scar, even the tiny ones count because it’s not just about size but about how you get them that determines whether you’re a winner or not.

But sometimes it’s the scars we can’t see that leave the most damage, and victory may come with a very high price.

Innovative filmed sequences and a powerful live performance bring to life a story that manages to be funny, heartfelt and heartbreaking at the same time. With a shocking twist in the tale, The Worm Collector burrows into the head of a teenage boy who makes the simple mistake of taking matters into his own hands.”

Saturday, April 23, 2011

19th April - Interview With Gail McIntyre

19th April – Interview with Gail McIntyre
Creative Arts and Media Diploma
Miss Woffinden
Bethany Kaye


To begin the session Gail started off by telling us all a little bit about herself. She is the Associate Director at the West Yorkshire Playhouse and is in charge of everything involving theatre in education. If something goes wrong, it’s her fault, if there’s a problem, colleagues will go to her and vice versa if it’s positive. Basically she is control of everything apart from deciding on what TIE themes to perform. For example, Gail would really like to do a piece on Child carers but she has been told that this project will not be funded and she won’t get paid, however if she does another piece about knife crime she will be paid and this project will be funded because it’s what the viewers want. I think this is really unfair, as the viewers don’t know what they want. They are roped into a performance because of the advertising and the ideas the theatre companies come up with. I think if Gail were to do a piece on Child Carers it would be a massive hit and would grab the attention of several different audience types.
Gail’s responsibilities within different schools involve planning, programming and delivering. The youngest age range is 3-5year olds. She creates work with varieties of different artists eg – actors, singers, dancers, poets ect...  This sounds quite cool and a challenging but fun job.
Lots of Gail’s decided age ranges have expanded due to teachers or guardians deciding that the TIE piece is suitable for another or a different age range. She has worked at the West Yorkshire Playhouse for a long time and has been in charge of the Christmas production in the courtyard for 5 years now. I think this is good that the teachers have a voice but kind of undermines the time Gail has spent deciding on the age ranges.
Her current project is called The Refugee Boy. It will be in the theatre in August 2012. This piece is by Benjamin Zephaniah but adapted by Yorkshire poet, Lemn Sissay. She said she is passionate about touring in schools. “It’s something I have always wanted to do and dreamed about it as a child. I have to say I am a very lucky person for getting the job of my dreams!”  She is right here!

What styles of theatre do you use in your productions?
“It’s actually not always up to us. Some people may decline some of our ideas but give you another option. I really want to do a TIE piece on Child Carers but I have been told I would not be funded for this. Instead a piece about knife crime is wanted so I have to do this otherwise I will not get paid. I also really want to work with different cultures; Especially the Asian/ Indian cultures of theatre.” This is unfair because Gail deserves to do what she wants to do but I can see why she isn’t allowed as the funding plays a massive part in it.
How are your projects funded?
“The touring in schools work with our TIE pieces are funded by Education Leeds, but this funding stops at the end of this year (2011). The work done at the Playhouse is funded by the Arts Council but other specific productions i.e. - knife crime – are funded by The Home Office, or The Royal Armouries ect... We are also paid for commissioning monologues.” I think it’s good they get money from different companies as it is very hard to fund a project.

Is there a hierarchy for the roles/ responsibilities within the company?
“Whatever happens, I am responsible for everything! I make nearly every decision about what is happening concerning TIE. The hierarchies are led by different artists. For example the actors, playwrights, singers, poets ect... Make their own decisions about their own pieces. You have to decide who is the most skilled at individual things with their abilities. Within the theatre you have to be collaborative.” This is a massive responsibility! The idea is very flattering but scary!
How long does it take you to produce a TIE piece of high quality?
“Well... If we commission a piece in 2008, we tell the writers and they have a year to produce a script, (whilst busy with other work). We usually play for two years ahead. We then rehearse 9-5 Monday- Saturday for 3-4 weeks. Then the designers and set and props crew ect... need time to work out what’s going on in the piece. You have to work out how YOU want it to look, how YOU want people to see it and what they will see.  As well as the rehearsal schedule to think about we have to book the tour and work on the workshop to follow the performance.” This is a good amount of time and personally I am finding it hard to create a good piece of TIE within our time boundaries.
Are the age groups difficult to choose?
“No they are all just different. I have to find the things that will encourage and inspire people and decide which age range it will have the biggest impact on. To do my job your really have to be in touch with any age group to connect to them properly.” I find it hard to decide what performance would suit which age rang. This is definitely not my strongest point!
Do you use songs and music in you performances?
“Yes in different ways. The music in the show First Cut portrays the life and emotional journeys of the character. In the Worm Collector we use sound effects to create an atmosphere and explain where you are without actually being there. This sets the scene whilst being versatile.
Music and sounds makes the journey unfold and tells the story. We try stuff in rehearsals to see what works and what doesn’t.  Music for younger ages like Visiting Grandpa, for 3-5 year olds is more appropriate as it engages there minds in a more fun way.”  I totally agree with what Gail says here and we are using our music for the exact reason too.
How do you connect with the different audiences?
“Forum theatre is a good way to get the audience involved, depending on the audience. In The Snow Queen, the actors who play the robbers rob the audience (without harassing them). This is a fun way to connect the audience with the performance and make them feel part of the story.”  I do like it when the actors engage with the audience :) I find it fun and it makes me feel part of the performance.
How do you get different audience types into the theatre?
“There are different ways to do this. Advertising helps a lot. The Playhouse is a very lucky company and has a very clever and very big marketing team.  
Encouraging schools and engaging with creativity is the other way to get audiences.  We just have to work out what different audiences want.” I can imagine this is a long and tedious project.
Have you ever acted and directed yourself at the same time?
“No, I really don’t think anybody should ever act and direct themselves at the same time. You can tell who does this because of their expressions in the performance. They are never fully connected to the character and it’s very hard to do so when you are acting.” I have noticed this before and it kind of spoils the production a bit.

Do you gather inspiration by seeing other peoples work?
“Yes you have to otherwise it is very hard to think of something original without seeing a starting point. There are no new ideas; they are what you make them.” This is interesting and I have never seen it this way before.
Have you ever had any projects where you feel you have just ‘Had Enough’?
No, Never. Things I have worked on have become slightly tedious or challenging because of the combination of colleagues I worked with but I never ever have had enough of a project. This is a good sign and shows she has a lot of patience and doesn’t give in quickly.
Do you enjoy your job?
Yes! Very much. It’s a very challenging job. It’s very challenging to find what it is that will make a great piece. What will inspire people? You know a piece is good if the actors feel part of it. I think this is really positive and again totally agree!!!

I really liked meeting Gail. She seems like a really lovely person and she seems so approachable and really good at what she does. Gail said she wanted to come and see our TIE pieces! This excited me and scared me at the same time! I think it would be a great opportunity for Gail to watch our performances and we would more than likely get excellent feedback and constructive criticism to work on! Thank you Miss Woffinden for planning this meeting :)

Tuesday, March 15, 2011

15th March - Lesson Write up

Tuesday 15th March

Lesson Write Up

Today in Miss Woffinden’s Lesson we reflected on our homework from the week before. She mentioned how detailed Frankie Cooney’s was and about Emily’s evaluation table and so I had a look on the blog at each of these things. I agree that Frankie’s is very detailed and an inspiration but Emily hasn’t put her table up yet and so I don’t know what she has evaluated me like and will blog next when I find out.
She said that the pictures I had put on were really strong and it would be interesting to see how we decide to use these in our workshop. The pictures were the same as I have used in blog entry: December 14th Choosing the Issues and why? (Click on the hyperlink to follow it)
Miss Woffinden then asked us to decide on the purpose of our props and reflect on our research. The purpose of our dress is to look like a size four and to look old but to show her traumatizing past. The skeleton is to support the dress and as the true story is called 'The Skeleton in my Closet' we thought it would be really effective to take the metaphorically written work and make it literal. We thought that displaying her as bones of a skeleton would be powerful and help to give the story meaning and the respect it deserves.
Evaluating personal skills:
My role in the play is a bit of everything as we are all doing a little bit of everything. We are all involved in the script work, song writing, advertising, acting and directing part of the Task. I feel I could do a lot of good directing work and I'm keen to get involved that way. As for the script work, I reckon it is a working process and will be done in good time with outstanding quality.
If I were to evaluate myself using the PLTS' I would give myself green for: Being Organised, Managing Emotions, Managing Risks, Imagine, Make Links, Persuade Others, Identify IssuesSet Myself Challenges, Plan - Do - Review, Find Solutions, Invite Feedback, Share Learning, Take Responsibility, Build Team Strengths, Manage the Team, Reach Conclusions, Evaluate the Evidence and Stay Objective
If I were to evaluate myself using the PLTS' I would give myself amber for: Go For It, Finish It. This is because I don't want to seem too over enthusiastic and sometimes when I have ideas, I don't always want/ know how to carry them out. Question Assumptions, this is because I don't really know how to question assumptions or how to word it without sounding too rude. I don't question assumptions very often and so this is amber. Take Creative Risks, I generally have many good ideas I just underestimate myself too much and get quite worried in case I go for something and it doesn't work out as I had planned. I would then beat myself up all day about something not going to plan (metaphorically of course). Get Involved, because no matter how confident I am I get extremely paranoid that people are going to judge me as harshly as I judge myself. I get involved with everything I can do but I just worry too much about things not going right. I suppose this is all part of drama and evaluating yourselves and I think I should stop being so paranoid about nothing. Evaluate the Team, I know whoever I am with in the diploma team will be willing to accept feedback and evaluation from me and will not judge or take offence at any constructive criticism but I can't help but worry what people will think if I try to evaluate them. I don't want to sound unkind or nasty but I wouldn't know how to broach the situation. Explore a question; if I am personally honest I actually do not know what this question means and will ask Miss Woffinden as I am unsure of this. I am sure it is something we will have done many times as a diploma team but I am unsure of what it is because of the name.
Overall I think I am very positive with most of the PLTS' and I think I just judge myself too harshly and worry what other people think. I need to try to 'stop worrying and just have a go.'

Once we had discussed this for some time we re-wrote our timeline using Matchware Mindview. Here is our timeline:



Timeline made using Matchware - Mindview
 

Then we went into the drama room to rehearse our piece again and again until we were ready to show.
Here are pictures of us rehearsing:

Our Scripts









Then we performed. Miss Woffinden said she liked how we had used a true story but said we have to make sure it’s not copyrighted and make sure we use our own work in there too.
She also said we have to question whether the language is too formal for our target audience, but then again we don’t want to patronise them. It's something we have to think about when we are writing more of the script. I think our performance is controversial they way Me and Imogen use more formal language in relation to our characters and Emily and Courtney use more childish/ teeangerish language, in relation to their characters. We have to make sure we know why we have chosen our lines and in our case we want it to be religious to the true life story. As for the transitions between the scenes I think our dress may stay on the stage for the whole production as it is the main thing and all our script relates to that. We decided to use a questionnaire for our target audience to find out more about their knowledge of our piece. Here is our questionnaire and script so far: